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2013-05-19T18:13:00Z

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That's funny, I made the review section on the exact same time you made this blog!

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2013-05-19T17:41:21Z

Created page with "I always think of contributed characters to a story not in the same plain of existence/dimension. And yes, I will donate Magno. I would say until his story arc in MS is done b..."

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I always think of contributed characters to a story not in the same plain of existence/dimension. And yes, I will donate Magno. I would say until his story arc in MS is done but that would make me a hypocrite.

User blog:Deltrax7/What do you think about End of Days so far?

2013-05-19T17:39:34Z

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That Cake is MINE!- Deltrax7
==The Blog==
Hi guys, Im just curios to know- How are you finding my End of days story so far? What do you like about it, what do you dislike, whats intriguing you about it? Leave your comments below and I'l make sure I'll check them out.!

[[User:Deltrax7|Deltrax7]] ([[User talk:Deltrax7|talk]]) 17:39, May 19, 2013 (UTC)
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Forum:End Of Days

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Forum:End Of Days

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2013-05-19T17:17:50Z

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Oh no. We cant use thrust, Im using him in a story at the moment

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2013-05-19T13:08:47Z

Created page with "On second thought, that is a great idea for the climax or the weapon every one is afaid of."

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On second thought, that is a great idea for the climax or the weapon every one is afaid of.

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2013-05-19T13:05:24Z

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2013-05-19T13:04:16Z

Created page with "Maybe not the best idea."

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[[http://custombionicle.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Echo_1/Elements_You_Should_Not_Give_Your_Characters|Maybe not the best idea.]]

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2013-05-19T13:01:54Z

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You mean XL villains? That makes more sense if they are dumb enough.

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2013-05-19T13:00:50Z

Created page with "Ohh don't worry, I'll have more grunts donated then meals I can remember. In fact, there may be too many."

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Ohh don't worry, I'll have more grunts donated then meals I can remember. In fact, there may be too many.

User blog:HeroSpartan777/Crazy Idea that maybe all of you like.....

2013-05-19T12:16:58Z

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2013-05-19T12:14:41Z

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Of course, if your giving a villain character, it can't be the grunt, they should have minions, like DeathThorne in 21bub21 Infernum

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User blog:Recgameboy/SPOILER: Transforming Hero.

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2013-05-19T06:53:15Z

Created page with "well, the grunts can be XL, but for some purpose, like the one holding RPGs, cannon, 50 cal. mini gun, snd other big weapons"

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well, the grunts can be XL, but for some purpose, like the one holding RPGs, cannon, 50 cal. mini gun, snd other big weapons

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2013-05-19T06:49:35Z

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so... how about anti matter charge bomb?

User blog:OonieCacola/New story in the making!

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Steve Kiiro

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Mark Surge

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Mark Surge

2013-05-19T00:41:39Z

OK, I don't hate Shaun White ''that'' much

Mark Surge

2013-05-19T00:31:09Z

My gosh, Surge looks like he has more in his bio than Stormer!

User blog comment:HeroSpartan777/Crazy Idea that maybe all of you like...../@comment-BobTheDoctor27-20130513193224/@comment-Bioniclezilla76-20130519003016

2013-05-19T00:30:16Z

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''As Magneto turned the tides Hero Factory, he used his mere pawns, Galactus, Phoenix, and Apocalypse finish the battle. Unfortunately, his rook, that dude who kills by hugging people by bursting with spikes didn't quite protect Magneto's fortress.''

Preston Stormer

2013-05-19T00:16:29Z

User blog comment:HeroSpartan777/Crazy Idea that maybe all of you like...../@comment-BobTheDoctor27-20130513193224/@comment-OonieCacola-20130519000345

2013-05-19T00:03:45Z

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Hah, can you imagine XL heroes as mere grunts? That would make for a disastrous result in the case of battle.

Nathan Evo

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Dragon Bolt (ThePurpleDragonNinja)

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Dak Frostbite

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Dark Daggers

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User blog comment:HeroSpartan777/Crazy Idea that maybe all of you like...../@comment-Deltrax7-20130518181813/@comment-Bioniclezilla76-20130518193000

2013-05-18T19:30:00Z

Created page with "The aldus idea is great. It will make everything much more intence."

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The aldus idea is great. It will make everything much more intence.

Forum:The Millennial's Shadow

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Forum talk:Millennial Shadow

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2013-05-18T18:25:51Z

Created page with "I know exactly who to donate, but I must complete most of Millennial Shadow. And he can't be a grunt, he needs to either be another complete faction or a main antagonist. i gu..."

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I know exactly who to donate, but I must complete most of Millennial Shadow. And he can't be a grunt, he needs to either be another complete faction or a main antagonist. i guess this will be a while XD.

User blog comment:HeroSpartan777/Crazy Idea that maybe all of you like...../@comment-Deltrax7-20130518181813

2013-05-18T18:20:46Z

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2013-05-18T18:18:13Z

Created page with "Ohhh cool! Hey, Maybe we could use Aldus6 Ice Speeders as vehicles, I'd be happy for you to use them. Also, I'd be willing to have Jamie Thrust be in your story. I did ask if ..."

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Ohhh cool! Hey, Maybe we could use Aldus6 Ice Speeders as vehicles, I'd be happy for you to use them. Also, I'd be willing to have Jamie Thrust be in your story. I did ask if he was going to be in the H-Team, but by that time it was gone, Kaput, Busted.

One condition though- there has to be a tottaly awesome scene were he comes with his massive guns and destroys stuff. Mwhahahaha!

Forum:End Of Days

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Nathan Evo

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Mark Surge

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2013-05-18T16:11:40Z

Created page with "The millennial Drones will be good grunts. When I make the page. And also some of the victims in Millennial Shadow. And the two heroes killed on my [[Corroder (Bioniclezilla76..."

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The millennial Drones will be good grunts. When I make the page. And also some of the victims in Millennial Shadow. And the two heroes killed on my [[Corroder (Bioniclezilla76)]] page.

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2013-05-18T15:58:03Z

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I think XL heroes are anything but grunts XD

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	As soon as Blitz said that, all the lights went out and screams came through the building. "Crap! Get to the roof!" Shouted Grudge. The group bounded up the nearby stairs and scrambled onto the roof and looked over. Hoards of Zombies were pouring out of the building and into the city. Explosions were going off far into the distance, suggesting that they had broken out of somewhere else as well. A huge blast came through the sky as a Bombing siren went off. A nuclear bomb was falling in the distance, and when it hit the bgroung, there was a state of panic. "Why in the name of god is a nuke going off ?!?!?!?!" Shouted Thrust. Chill however, was more concerned about a abnormal shockwave thundering towards them. "Everyone inside NOW!" He shouted.		As soon as Blitz said that, all the lights went out and screams came through the building. "Crap! Get to the roof!" Shouted Grudge. The group bounded up the nearby stairs and scrambled onto the roof and looked over. Hoards of Zombies were pouring out of the building and into the city. Explosions were going off far into the distance, suggesting that they had broken out of somewhere else as well. A huge blast came through the sky as a Bombing siren went off. A nuclear bomb was falling in the distance, and when it hit the bgroung, there was a state of panic. "Why in the name of god is a nuke going off ?!?!?!?!" Shouted Thrust. Chill however, was more concerned about a abnormal shockwave thundering towards them. "Everyone inside NOW!" He shouted.
		+	==Reviews==
		+	Bioniclezilla's review comming soon.

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 ===Chapter One===
-"How many times do I have to tell you, I dont have the appropriote Equipment! And even if I did, I wouldnt give it to you, I dont agree with your 'plan' as you call it!" yelled a hero factory scientist to the dark figure of a hooded man. "Don't tell me you forgot the deal" the figure gasped sarcastically "the deal that was- if you dont get me the deployment technology, YOU will be the test subject. Ok?" This seemed to change the Doctor's mind as he scardley squealed "Okay Okay I will do it. I will have something by Friday, Okay?" The figure smiled evilly from under his hood "thank you doctor. That will be all." and with that, the man teleported, and vanished.
+"How many times do I have to tell you, I dont have the appropriote Equipment! And even if I did, I wouldnt give it to you, I dont agree with your 'plan' as you call it!" yelled a hero factory scientist to the dark figure of a hooded man. "Don't tell me you forgot the deal" the figure gasped sarcastically "the deal that was- if you dont get me the deployment technology, YOU will be the test subject. Ok?" This seemed to change the Doctor's mind as he scardley squealed "Okay Okay I will do it. I will have something by Friday, Okay?" The figure smiled evilly from under his hood "thank you doctor xain. That will be all." and with that, the man teleported, and vanished.
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 "MECA1, I'd like you to meet [[Darren Grudge]] . Im sure you've heard of him." Said [[Nathaniel Zib]], a mission controller at the hero factory. "Damn straight we've heard of him, this guys a legend! I am so pleased to meet you" Said Thrust before touching fists with Grudge."Nice to meet you too." Said Grudge "But im afraid we have a serious problem." "Whats that then?" said Blitz. "Well heres the thing. I was on patrol in they city when I heard an odd sound in a building that had its windows smashed in. In went in and found the thing in there attempting to attack a civillian. We arent sure what it is, but it defintley isnt anything natrual."
-The Group turned and Recoiled at what they saw on the other side of the door. A creature that could only be desrcibed as a Zombie was being held in an X shape, going absolutley rabid. Steve Chill recoiled when he saw, but on a second glance, he glanced at the Zombies clothes. He had a name tag on his right breast pocket of his shirt- Doctor Xain- Biochemical Department.
+The Group turned and Recoiled at what they saw on the other side of the door. A creature that could only be desrcibed as a Zombie was being held in an X shape, going absolutley rabid. Steve Chill recoiled when he saw, but on a second glance, he glanced at the Zombies blood stained clothes. He had a name tag on his right breast pocket of his shirt- Doctor Xain- Biochemical Department. "Oh my god, I know him! How the hell did this happen to him?" Gasped Chill. "Never mind that, look at his fingers- they have blood on them." Blitz put his hands on Zibs shoulders and asked him seriously-"Grudge said he was trying to attack a civillian, were are they? Did they get scratched?" Zib answered nervously, "He's in the minor wounds area in the hospital. He has scratches on his chest near his heart, and"- Blitz cut him off. "The hospitals packed this time of year. We got to get there and warn them!".

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 Ehmm... After some thinking, the story Will be a planet gone rouge and attack Makuhero city, after that, it'll be every One Will contribute in the story, like putting some ideas for story, all ideal will be considered, including usage of vehicles and bombs, still Thanks for agreeing
-nd edit: for vehicles, Deltrax7 Aldus ice speeder will be in, because coincidentally, I'm thinking it'll take place at an ice planet, climax of the story is in my head although, I haven't get ideas for the beginning, for enemies, however, their picture are getting to me, about their cities, technology, but their appeareance is a blank to me, so this is your chance to make model for them
+nd edit: for vehicles, Deltrax7 Aldus ice speeder will be in, because coincidentally, I'm thinking it'll take place at an ice planet, climax of the story is in my head although, I haven't get ideas for the beginning, for enemies, however, their picture are getting to me, about their cities, technology, but their appeareance is a blank to me, so this is your chance to make model for them, and comment about swearing, can it include to the story? Just this one
 P.s.: BTD27, did you want Kate Roscoe to be dead? I can arrange the story to be that way..... ;p
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 Ehmm... After some thinking, the story Will be a planet gone rouge and attack Makuhero city, after that, it'll be every One Will contribute in the story, like putting some ideas for story, all ideal will be considered, including usage of vehicles and bombs, still Thanks for agreeing
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 File:Plane Steve.jpg| I have removed the spikes on the wings because they got in the way for his other form.
 File:Plane Steve 2.jpg|Now he has two!!
-File:Plane Steve Bottom.jpg|One of the hardest parts was what to do with his head.
+File:Plane Steve Bottom.jpg|One of the hardest parts was what to do with his head. Also note I got rid of his gold plate.
-File:Steveformer.jpg|His first act a a giant: Step on anyone smaller than him.
+File:Steveformer.jpg|He kinda reminds me of some sort of dragon.
 File:Steveformer Back.jpg|Since I finished building him in plane form, I had nowhere to put the cockpit, so I gave him a tail.
 File:Steveformer Side.jpg|I might do something with his legs later.....

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	Nothing really new here, but I must ask for everyone's opinion. Should I place the canon heroes/misc.characters in the story? I can set it up either way, with or without.		Nothing really new here, but I must ask for everyone's opinion. Should I place the canon heroes/misc.characters in the story? I can set it up either way, with or without.
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		+	'''Edit 5/18/13'''
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		+	Wow it has been a while since I touched up on this. Sorry anyone who was anticipating (or not). Now, characters are begining to develop, and the plot has a solid foundation, but it could go anywhere at the moment. Still comment if there is something you'd like to discuss.
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 |header = Hero
 |affiliation = Hero Factory
-|weapons = Daul electric shockers, Plasma blaster, Electro-sword, Lightning gun
+|weapons = Dual electric shockers, Plasma blaster, Electro-sword, Lightning gun
 |status = Alive
 |location = [[Makuhero City]]}}

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 '''Mark Surge '''is a hero that was created in the [[Hero Factory]].
 ==History==
-===Shaun White===
+===Jack White===
-Surge's first solo mission, he was sent to find a rogue hero. He was upgraded with a shock suit. A few days later, he saw that Shaun white was now with the 4.0 larger upgrade. He kept disappearing and reappearing, eventually got a hero core on a stash somehow. Each time with one more core than the last. He kept disappearing and reappearing faster and faster, it turned into a night with only red sky and black silhouettes. Eventually, he appeared write were surge stood. He had multiple eyes and a claw. His plasma gun was without a hand. His claw continuously tearing at surges chest before he could scream. Electricity bolted into Shaun and so he ran away. Surges core was half out, slowly dying. Stormer and alpha team came in a truck putting him into the [[T-System]], still alive enough for him to be revived. He failed his mission-miserably.
+Surge's first solo mission, he was sent to find a rogue hero. He was upgraded with a shock suit. A few days later, he saw that John white was now with the 4.0 larger upgrade. He kept disappearing and reappearing, eventually got a hero core on a stash somehow. Each time with one more core than the last. He kept disappearing and reappearing faster and faster, it turned into a night with only red sky and black silhouettes. Eventually, he appeared write were surge stood. He had multiple eyes and a claw. His plasma gun was without a hand. His claw continuously tearing at surges chest before he could scream. Electricity bolted into John and so he ran away. Surges core was half out, slowly dying. Stormer and alpha team came in a truck putting him into the [[T-System]], still alive enough for him to be revived. He failed his mission-miserably.
 ===Rise of the Rookies===
 Surge was one of the three new rookies on [[Alpha Team]], alongside [[William Furno|Furno]] and [[Natalie Breez|Breez]].
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 |header = Hero
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-|weapons = Ice spear Blaster
+|weapons = Daul electric shockers, Plasma blaster, Electro-sword, Lightning gun
 |status = Alive
 |location = [[Makuhero City]]}}
-'''Mark Surge '''is a Hero that was created in the [[Hero Factory]].
+'''Mark Surge '''is a hero that was created in the [[Hero Factory]].
 ==History==
 ===Shaun White===
-Surge's first solo mission, he was sent to find a rogue hero. He was upgraded with a shock suit. A few days later, he saw that Shaun white was now with the 4.0 larger upgrade. He kept disapearing and reapearing, eventually got a hero core on a stash somehow. Each time with one more core than the last. He kept disapearing and reapearing faster and faster, it turned into a night with only red sky and black sillowets. Eventually, he appeared write were surge stood. He had multiple eyes and a claw. His plasma gun was without a hand. His claw continuously tearing at surges chest before he could scream. Electricity bolted into Shaun and so he ran away. Surges core was half out, slowly dying. Stormer and alpha team came in a truck putting him into the [[T-System]], still alive enough for him to be revived. He failed his mission-miserably.
+Surge's first solo mission, he was sent to find a rogue hero. He was upgraded with a shock suit. A few days later, he saw that Shaun white was now with the 4.0 larger upgrade. He kept disappearing and reappearing, eventually got a hero core on a stash somehow. Each time with one more core than the last. He kept disappearing and reappearing faster and faster, it turned into a night with only red sky and black silhouettes. Eventually, he appeared write were surge stood. He had multiple eyes and a claw. His plasma gun was without a hand. His claw continuously tearing at surges chest before he could scream. Electricity bolted into Shaun and so he ran away. Surges core was half out, slowly dying. Stormer and alpha team came in a truck putting him into the [[T-System]], still alive enough for him to be revived. He failed his mission-miserably.
 ===Rise of the Rookies===
-TBA
+Surge was one of the three new rookies on [[Alpha Team]], alongside [[William Furno|Furno]] and [[Natalie Breez|Breez]].
 ===Breakout===
-TBA
+During the Breakout, Surge was sent out to re-capture [[Splitface]].
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 {{Canon|page = Preston Stormer}}
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-|image = [[File:PrestonStormer.jpg|250px]] [[File:Stormerbrainattack.jpg|thumb]]
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-'''Preston Stormer''' is a well-known Hero currently working for the [[Hero Factory]]. He his well-known for having captured [[Von Nebula]], the [[Fire Lord]], the [[Witch Doctor]], and the [[Speeda Demon]] prior to their escapes.
+'''Preston Stormer''' is a well-known hero currently working for the [[Hero Factory]], and the leader of the highly respected [[Alpha Team]]. He his well-known for having captured [[Von Nebula]], the [[Fire Lord]], the [[Witch Doctor]], and the [[Speeda Demon]] prior to their escapes.
 ==Biography==
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 Stormer was the leader of his faction during the civil war. He fought through many battles to defeat his enemies. He was then merged with Nex and Furno to create NEXT.
 ===Breakout===
-TBA
+Stormer was assigned to catch the villain [[Speeda Demon]], and was upgraded into an XL hero. He pursued the villain on amodified variant of [[Furno Bike|Furno's bike]] through the icy valley. In the end he was able to catch and cuff Speeda Demon, and returned to Hero Factory with the other heroes to confront [[Black Phantom]].
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-|page = Nathan Evo}}{{Character
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 {{Quote|Let's go after them, Heroes!|Evo in Breakout}} {{stats
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 '''Nathan Evo '''is a Hero that was created in the Assembly Tower. His first major mission was at Tanker Station 22, and would later be the battle in [[Makuhero City]], featured in ''[[The Vengeance Attack]]''.
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 ===Later Missions===
-After arresting Toxic Reapa, Evo was sent to assist another Hero in capturing Fire Lord. He continues to bring in villians and has a long career ahead of him.
+After arresting Toxic Reapa, Evo was sent to assist another heroes in capturing Fire Lord. He continues to bring in villians and has a long career ahead of him.
 ===Brain Attack===
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 ==Equipment==
 ===2.0 Form===
-Evo wielded a [[Multi-Tool Shield]]. His headgear featured an air filter.
+Evo wielded a [[Multifunctional Ice Weapon]] to aid him against the Fire villains. His headgear featured an air filter.
-===4.0 Form===
+===Breakout Form===
-Evo has a [[Tank Arm]]. His armor is toxic proof.
+Evo was upgraded with a [[Tank Arm]]. His armor is toxic proof, although not impenetrable.
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-Evo tends to rush into things. He knows when to ask for help.
+Evo tended to rush into things during the Breakout. He knows when to ask for help, where Furno helped him through the rough spots.
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 ==Trivia==
 *[[User:ThePurpleDragonNinja|ThePurpleDragonNinja]] hopes to feature these creatures in an upcoming story.
-*This creature was originally a summer 2013 Brain Attack set. That particular form is, according to ThePurpleDragonNinja's mythos, an adolescent.
+*This creature was originally a summer 2013 Brain Attack set. That particular form is, according to ThePurpleDragonNinja's mythos, an adolescent, the adult being over a meter long in MOC form. Note that this is an estimate, as the MOC has yet to be finished.
 *For the canon version, see [[Dragon Bolt|this page]].
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 {{Writer|OonieCacola}}{{Character
-|color = white
+|color =
 |affiliation = Hero Factory: Halix-4 Team, Snowsone Syndicate
 |weapons = ice blaster, royal saber
 |status = alive
-|location = Snowklone headquarters|image = [[File:DSC02528.JPG|250px]]Breakout form}}
+|location = Snowklone headquarters|image = [[File:DSC02528.JPG|250px]]Breakout form|<div style= = title</div>" id="templateEditorParameter1">}}
 '''Dak Frostbite''' is a novice hero on Hero Factory's Halix-4 Team, and also a member of the Snowklone Syndicate.

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-The '''Dark Daggers''' are Darkwarp's weapons of choice.
+{{improvement}}The '''Dark Daggers''' are Darkwarp's weapons of choice.
 ==Powers ==
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 [[Category:Articles For Improvement]]
 [[Category:Blades/Swords]]
 [[Category:Intact Objects]]

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 ===Infection===
 Mandibles, ice claws and frost blade.
 ==Trivia==

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 |agility = 11
 |toughness = 6
-|mind = 4|endurance = 9
+|mind = 0|endurance = 9
-|intelligence = 4}}
+|intelligence = 0}}
 ==Trivia==
 *Their clawed armor can replace a claw cut off.

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 In the mission control center, every hero was terrified. The last time this happened it was with Iron Kriko attacked the [[T-System|T System]].
-"Hello fellow Heroes, you all know who I am, and if you are worried what the news is, you arrent reacting appropiately. You see, this is one of the worst events in history since the Kloatum System blew up and created the universe but destroyed everything before that. If you are panicked, then stay prideful for the event. Every single villain the storage facility has escaped. Not a single one got recaptured. Our goal is to change that, and catch em', and cuff em'. We have saved our materials for more Heroes and 1,000 more will be made in 2 minutes. You will be as strong as the villains you fight, and you will each get another teammate exept for the Flame 7 Team. Everyone of you will have a new flexible, stronger and much more powerful chestplates. A nice new plasma blaster will be equipped on all of you. Last but not least, what will save most of you lives, a pair of Artificially intelligent hand cuffs that can lock on the DNA that we put in each one of them, and they are impossible to break and weakens the opponent in any size to sleep. Any questions?" TBA
+"Hello fellow Heroes, you all know who I am, and if you are worried what the news is, you arrent reacting appropiately. You see, this is one of the worst events in history since the Kloatum System blew up and created the universe but destroyed everything before that. If you are panicked, then stay prideful for the event. Every single villain the storage facility has escaped. Not a single one got recaptured. Our goal is to change that, and catch em', and cuff em'. We have saved our materials for more Heroes and 1,000 more will be made in 2 minutes. You will be as strong as the villains you fight, and you will each get another teammate exept for the Flame 7 Team. Everyone of you will have a new flexible, stronger and much more powerful chestplates. A nice new plasma blaster will be equipped on all of you. Last but not least, what will save most of you lives, a pair of Artificially intelligent hand cuffs that can lock on the DNA that we put in each one of them, and they are impossible to break and weakens the opponent in any size to sleep. Any questions?"
 ==Characters==
 ===Canon===

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−	Ohhh cool! Hey, Maybe we could use Aldus6 Ice Speeders as vehicles, I'd be happy for you to use them. Also, I'd be willing to have Jamie Thrust be in your story. I did ask if he was going to be in the H-Team, but by that time it was gone, Kaput, Busted.	+	Ohhh cool! Hey, Maybe we could use [[Aldus6 Ice Speeder]]s as vehicles, I'd be happy for you to use them. Also, I'd be willing to have [[Jamie Thrust]] be in your story. I did ask if he was going to be in the H-Team, but by that time it was gone, Kaput, Busted.

	One condition though- there has to be a tottaly awesome scene were he comes with his massive guns and destroys stuff. Mwhahahaha!		One condition though- there has to be a tottaly awesome scene were he comes with his massive guns and destroys stuff. Mwhahahaha!
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 ===[[Infernum]]===
 [[Daniel Rocka (21bub21)|Rocka]] will also later appear in [[Infernum]] in his XL form.
 ==Personality and Traits==
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 Rocka_4.0.jpg|Breakout Rocka
 Tn_44002_ROCKA_17.jpg|Brain Attack Rocka
 </gallery>
 [[Category:Hero Recon Team]]