Forum:Millennial Shadow[]
OK, I started that story way wrong. The characters rarely get mentioned, it is a mess, and rushed. I haven't even gotten half way through the story and it is getting out of control. Now, here is were you come in. Give me some suggestions and tell me through the poll whether or not I should revamp the story or try to continue retaining control and the tone I was looking for through Breakout. Breakout seems like the real beginning to me and, looking at how long it is so far, it would be the longest page on the wiki if I multiply by ten. I need reviews on the review section. To be perfectly honest, I rather have a rant like the Angry Video Game Nerd after playing a terrible game then no review at all. As long as it is constructive criticism, I will appreciate it a lot.